It all seems like a blur
When a couple of months ago, it was right there
It's hard to say what I feel now
I miss them, and I'm happy
I don't miss them, and I'm sad
I cry for no reason,
But I laugh for many
It's like it never happend, that it was only a dream
I was there for eight years, and there's nothing more to see
But I know it was there, and part of me wants to hold onto that rope
Can I really be part of both?
It's like a calm tornado.
I can't see either way.
It's like all that exsists right now, besides a dream, is another day
4 comments:
Trinity: Fantastic poem! Thanks for sharing it! It's beautiful, just like you! Love, Daddy
Trinity,
I dont know if you remember me (David Kizziah). I just wanted to let you know that your poem was amazing and it blessed my heart. I know the Lord is going to use you greatly both in Panama, and Costa Rica... and you know what, even in the ole USA.
Keep it up!
Niceeeeeeeeee! I liked it so much! Although, I must say, it was hard for me to find the flowingness a poem should have. Now that I think back on it, I see it represents a way to express yourself. Nothing really rhymes and it's all kind of confusing in a sense, so I think that represents the way you feel about moving to Costa Rica and, soon enough, Panama. The way your poem was written, you sounded confused, happy, scared, and sad all at the same time, and I think that's represented in the structure of your poem. Anyway, I really liked it, and I know, it WILL turn out for the better of you and your family in the end!
Love You Lots,
Claire
Hey,
I'm an mk to mexico. I loved ur poem. I can totally relate with how you feel. I also write poetry every once in a while:) That was really good!
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